Saturday, 31 January 2015

Changed Feature







I changed my feature article because I felt that it did not look as professional as it could have looked if I added a border. For example there were gaps in between the two pictures of my feature artist which made the article look less formal and that is not what I wanted my reader to see.
I also changed my paragraphs so they were not hyphenated, this would mean that the article is harder to read and once again look informal for my target audience. Lastly, I added the masthead to the feature article as it establishes to the reader that the article is exclusive to the magazine, I also found that when I was researching other popular and well-known magazines have used this.