Changed Front Cover

 I changed my front cover and added more information as my audience felt that my cover looked plain and less exciting as my page did not show all of the information that is actually presented inside. Adding more information allowed my magazine to reach out to other audiences as different information can appeal to different age groups and genders. I also enlarged my masthead as I felt that it looked more appealing and eye catching if it was spread across the page.

Changed Feature

I changed my feature article because I felt that it did not look as professional as it could have looked if I added a border. For example there were gaps in between the two pictures of my feature artist which made the article look less formal and that is not what I wanted my reader to see.
I also changed my paragraphs so they were not hyphenated, this would mean that the article is harder to read and once again look informal for my target audience. Lastly, I added the masthead to the feature article as it establishes to the reader that the article is exclusive to the magazine, I also found that when I was researching other popular and well-known magazines have used this.